I was digging through my files when I came across this little gem. It's my first script I've ever written where I could only write dialogue. It was bumpy but I think with some tweaks I could create something more with this.
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Woman
(Looking over counter
frantic and concerned)
"Hello? Hello?"
Old
Lady
(Screechy and Cheerfully)
"Welcome! What can I do for
you?"
Man
(Sickly clutching his stomach in
agony)
"Ugh"
Old
Lady
(Studious and Focused staring at
the man)
"Goodness me. This is a new
one."
Man
(Hunching over cringing)
"Unngh"
Woman
(Distressed and Worried)
"Can you help him?"
Old
Lady
(Intrigued and Smiling)
"I'm sure I can do something
for this man, provide he has the patience for some less…common practices."
Man
(Indignantly)
"Do I look like I have patience
to you?"
Woman
(Huffy and Apologetic)
Dear…
Old
Lady
(Annoyed and inquisive)
"hmph."
Old
Lady
(Loud and Authoritive)
"Joanna!"
Joanna
(Stuttering and Stammering in the
distance. Running with a large wooden box full of bottles)
"C-Coming!"
Old
Lady
(Rustles through wooden box full of
bottles Slowly and Frustrated)
"I can't find it."
Old
Lady
(Callously and squinting her eyes
down at Joanna suspiciously.)
"Joanna?"
Joanna
(Winching and fearfully looking up
at old lady)
"I…I don't know!"
Old
Lady
(Annoyed)
"Hmm. I guess I'll try them
all…"
Woman
(Hesitant but trusting)
"Drink this, dear..."
Man
(Drinks bottle)
"gulp"
(Silence from all people)
Man
(Hoarsely)
"(Belches),(Neighs)"
Woman
(Freaked out)
"Goodness!"
Old
Lady
(Disturbed)
"That's not the right one!
Give me a different one Joanna!"
(Joanna hands the Old Lady the
potion)
Old
Lady
(Desperately, feed bottle to man
who is now a horse)
"Drink this!"
Man
(Hoarsely drinks bottle)
"Gulp"
(Silence from all people)
Man
(Sheepishily)
"(Belches),
Baaaaaahhhhhhhh"
Woman
(Screams)
Old
Lady
(Frantically)
"Oh bother…d-drink this."
Man
(Sheepishly drinks bottle)
"Gulp"
(Silence from everyone, they are
all tense)
Man
(groggilly)
"Hiccup. Hiccup. ohhhh."
Woman
(Relived)
"Oh, thank goodness!"
Old
Lady and Joanna
(Relived)
"Ahhh…"
Man
(light-headed and calm)
"Ho boy…"
Woman
(grateful)
Oh thank you! Thank you very much!
Old
Lady
(Jovial and friendly)
"I'm glad to help)"
(Man coughs)
Old
Lady
(A matter a factly)
"Now, about your bill…"
Man
(Distressed and mortified)
"Oh no…"
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